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[Saba Sports News] The text does a great job of setting the scene by mentioning Jenn Tran’s recent heartbreak from her Bachelorette season, which gives the reader context for her current mindset.
Additionally, the transition from her initial crush on Jayson Tatum to her new interest in Max Strus is smooth, making the narrative easy to follow.
One area that could improve is the emotional depth—there’s a lot of potential to explore how Tran might feel about moving on from heartbreak or how her celebrity crushes could be a light-hearted way to cope.
Also, adding a bit more detail on why she shifted her focus to Max Strus could make that moment more engaging. Was it just availability, or does she admire something specific about him? A little extra insight would give the story more personality.